Comments : Not Like You

  • 11 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    I can feel the betrayal in this poem which is really good because betrayal can be a hard emotion to portray.

    I understand your pain because I have gone through this multiple times and sadly it manages to break my heart each and every time :( There is just something about being betrayed that goes down deep the core of a person. It makes one feel like they are not good enough sometimes - not even worthy of being friends with anyone.

    Excellent job at expressing betrayal, and disgust
    5/5