This reads like the 4 seasons: spring, summer, autumn and winter followed by spring again. Like a cycle = the butterfly's evolution.

very well written

5/5

Woooohooo another awesome nature piece by the Queen of Nature:)
I love it truly do:) great job Andrea:)

Oh oh oh!!! LOVE THIS of all nature poems this is soooo pretty! I've been really diggin' nature poems lately, so happy I stumbled upon this...I agree with Thomas about the cycle!

Great write!

I always love reading your nature pieces, they always make me calm down and bring me peace. :) such elegance.

5/5

Damm syrup!!! You so rock!!

I really looooved this piece and to be perfectly honest i have no idea how to comment!

I was wandering through a wonderland of magic :-)

Amazing!

What a lovely piece to read this Friday morning, nice way to start the day off!

Beautifully penned.

This is what a PICTURE PERFECT nature poem should be written. The images of those flowers were running so vividly in my head.

Only a true artist can draw such a beautiful and breathtaking picture using his words ..

This will be hanging as a unique painting in my favorites gallery :)

This one is my favorite part of this poem

Softly, I sing as a raindrop dances
around a wilted flower petals smile,
hope becomes a new spring

--- hopefully there will be hope for that wilted flower as the raindrops dances on her petals.

Wow, this poem is so mesmerizing... I was blown away by the way you described nature in this poem. I really enjoyed it. It was a hopeful poem, and reminded me of new beginning and accepting certain situations.

I love this stanza the most:

"Softly, I sing as a raindrop dances
around a wilted flower petals smile,
hope becomes a new spring."

Well done! =D

This is so elegant and beautiful. Hun you really have a way with words and your poems have this magical flow to them, that makes them so enjoyable and peaceful to read.

Awesome!

x

I love the imagery and the nature aspect to the whole piece, it worked and was beautiful to read...I felt transported into a new world, just awesome

mwah :)