I just love that poem it g]could go for the dreams also of a guy for the girl in them.

It is a beautiful poem 5/5

The flow of this starts off great, however do you need the word magic in line 7?
or the word piano in the last line in stanza 1? Like the imagery of tracing the sun.
I like how you start of a little vulnerable, as the poem goes along your character seems surer of herself.
that is full of a dreaming
language.

This little bit seems to stop the flow. "that is full of his dreamy language"
or similar. (your poem not mine!!!only a thought)
I like how he uses his piano to get right into your soul.
And we'll live, ready to fly
like the chords that he
kisses between my eyelids-
for silence is the loveliest
when I am holding
who I believe to be
tireless,

There are some fantastic lines in this stanza, "chords that he kisses between my eyelids"
It's funny how sentences that don't really make much sense in the real world sit perfectly in poetry.
Like how you portray the piano as singing to you, almost as if somebody singing along would ruin the moment.
Very deep, liked it immensely.