Wow, this is amazing. I suggest you capitalize the 'i's and the first letter of the line. I feel your emotions flowed remarkably well in this piece, wonderful write

It is very touching poem i really love it

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Yeah love sucks..yet i love love.nice piece

Awesome! Fantastic! Wonderful! Wow! Just wow!
Sad but cute poem...
It really hurts when the person we love doesn't care or doesn't seem to know our very existence!
5/5