Gud poem keep writing

Oh my,

This is beautiful but terribly sad too. I love the dedication to this person that even after 19 years you still hold the memory of this loved one completely tight.

The last stanza was it for me, that just tore me when I realised that this person had passed away. The dedication at the end of your poem was beautiful and to say spend it with your mum was argh,sad too because her mum must have passed away as well.

As far as the poem itself goes, I loved it. Loved the rhyming as it was not forced and just fit so well.

Beautiful poem.

x

Thanks!

Yeah her passed away when she was young and last year was her turn, unfortunately. She was an amazing person that should, and will, be remembered forever!

This is so sad. Must been a very special
person, too young to die. After all this time
she still remains in all of your hearts
I did like the ending, spending it with mom

A very sad, yet sweet and heartwarming rememberance. Such a special person, still with a special place in your heart.

Very nicely written.

The melancholic tone is just beautiful aside from the vibes it sends.

You always write such beautiful dedications. this has absolutely brought tears to my eyes, especially at the end.

wonderful write.

Thanks for your comment Hannah. Appreciate it immensely.