Morphine Masquerade

I've read this about 10 times already trying to find the right words to say... I'm not good at critiquing and I don't want to write "omg, i love this" all the time, but I do, you are amazing! I definitely love every line and the last word "thee" made this poem even better.

I can feel the sadness hun, reading this poem.

The idea of morphine, some kind of release from physical pain but it can never heal the emotional hurt we go through.

Awesome poem hun.

x

I like this poem, I also like the rhymes that I could spot within this poem. Perhaps, they might not be intentional. But they added a nice touch to this piece, Free and thee.. I also liked the ending with thee, instead of using you.. it sounds more loving and caring. I'm not a fan of poems that have those type of words like thee and thou, but there are a few that do captivate me, like this one and I guess it's because those words weren't overused.

Very sweet poem with a dark touch to it.

Great use of metaphors too ;)

5/5

Spit and post:)
I think this poem is a good example of that, isnt it?:)
A really heartfelt poem, great job:)