I am just sitting here and wanting not to comment. Actually too sad t comment and this write just made me sigh. A damn deep sigh. What a strength you do have to admit such a thing. :/ I think it's time for me to do so.
Love this and love you even more. Missed you.
5 years ago
by Purple Rose
Another beautiful poem, Liz. As with most of your poems, if not all, I believe this one also has a deeper meaning to it.
'You may be able
to see the bruises on
my skin but you cannot
see the bruises around
^ Love this part right here. The beginning catches my attention right away, and I must say that it is beautiful. It is also true - I believe that we suffer so much more mentally than physically sometimes.
'For so long I
was the victim
of your livid emotions
which somehow brought
me down with you.'
^ I love this stanza as well. Beautiful.
I have to agree with Luce, and Kyra. The ending was marvelous. It made me want to fight back with you. I also love the strength that is showing in this poem, because it indicates that you have come a long way.