This is absolutely magnificent. The form for starts is beguiling with its shape. I love how it interwoven two elements, whether tangible or intangible, elegantly.
You brilliantly executed the craft in this form.

Amazingly, you have descriped such contrasting objects; metal and wood, very exquisite of you. Best use of words, I loved it. Its on puropose I chose this because its a nature poem.

Keep up the ecxcellent work. Bon Travail! :) ..