If this is your first write then OMG you have just found a new home here, your word choice and flow is nothing short of mesmerising and the imagery is just wonderful.

Hurry up and write more i want more lol !!

5/5 all day long!

Great poem, loved the imagination and imagery.
Truly amazing

Great one, Aram (Y)

Woooooow!! Just by reading it I can tell that you nano's sister. The way you write is so similar to her.

Great job sweetie :)

Wtf!!! OMG

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Ohh come on Noura, the girl is so talented .. Give her a break ..

Btw, I love your name Aram :)))

I adore wood nymphs :-)

This poem is a delight to read, and you my dear are very talented!! Welcome to PnQ and I look forward to reading more from you!

No she writes just like you ;) :) you do look like twins in writing,...esp with her opening " 'midst my" you look like you been here forever.

good luck.

Because I edited the whole poem for her and she never gave me credit.

Great poem......love the structure and substance.....well done :)

Welcome to PnQ, Aram.

This poem is so beautiful that I failed to find it funny :) I don't think it belongs here (in this section), but maybe I am reading it wrong? Maybe there is a deeper meaning to it that I am not understanding.

Typos: second stanza, first line, I believe that 'sun's' needs to be changed to 'sun has' because there is no possessive with 'sun's' and if you did use it to omit 'is' it doesn't really make sense for that either.

Also I have a suggestion. Second line of the first stanza, I think that it would sound better with 'so' inserted between 'throat' and 'fast.' These two things should not interrupt the flow - it would make it go a little smoother I think. However, this is your poem, and I am just giving my suggestion...you don't have to do any of this whatsoever :)

Anyway, welcome to PnQ (again). I hope that you have fun here. Sorry I couldn't get to this yesterday.

Excellent
5/5

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