Comments : Storm Cleansing (Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Hmm.. thought provoking, unfortunately, I dont' think that the savage raging storm could take away the sins... even if we are death, I guess we take with us our sins, right? I'm not sure, but still I like this little piece. Well written. 5/7/5 syllables.

    • 11 years ago

      by Steven Beesley

      It's just a philosophical image borrowed for the poem and meant to stimulate thought.

      Thanks for your comment!