O _ M_ G @-@ !!!!

deliciously dark and just.....Sigh, syrup i love you dark write and this is one of my favourites!!

trapped within this mausoleum,
between shadow and light,
I can't cross over

^^^^^^ i love all of the poem but this.....the image just popped into my brain like a photograph!!!

FREAKIN LOVE IT!!!

Another AMAZING piece by you:)
AWESOME job:)

I lovee your dark poems! Write more ^_^

Ok this was not an ok poem for me to read, its storming here, the lights are flickering and this was creepy LOL

I loved this piece though. I admire that you can write a dark piece so well. its all in the wording, I can't seem to find an amazing way to word a dark piece like you have done here.

Well done as always!!

Your dark pieces are amazing, you always surprise me with something awesome!

I love the layout of the poem, the breaks between the lines, making me take my time to read it and sink in every word.

AWESOME write hun LOVE IT

x