Comments : Eternal duality

  • 11 years ago

    by Karla

    I like the philosofiical aspect of your poem. Very interesting.Very diferent.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This was so interesting randy! Weird thing is, I've never questione what if God had a mate..Thats funny in a way. Your poem was thought provoking now I have questions in my head, which is what made this poem amazing. You made your readers thing :) loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Write Randy!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Your piece is very mature and has an in depth meaning.... Interesting(:

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Okay, this are my thoughts.

    God is the Cause whose faith is so strong but so strong that can create even "us." ( the universe and everything that exists)

    But he has his Son, who is his Soul Mate in the sense that both of them are "One in the same" via their communication through the holy spirit. So i think the term Soulmate is not use as a lover but as someone who shares the same soul. Whose connection is too strong that can't be broken per se.

    So both of them work together in an eternal duality.

    But I could be wrong though,

    Edit: After second read, I think this is talking not about his son because it says before any spirit was made... Hmm... Good question.

    I have wonder that before, but I always thought that He might be too busy to have one.

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    For "Everything" and "Nothing"
    both exist... and they are one!
    like Soul mates to each other,
    they are exist in unison..

    Gud work, randy.