Encountering 'maize' on your way to 1/2 dreamy place - 1/2 real place. ..

that is awesome :)

and I think you mean: encountering 'light' ?

Really awesome, great job.
I think I may try writing a Haiku.

Glad to see you are writing more formed poetry. I think it's wonderful to find new ways to express how you feel.

I like this one, quite unique. I love the image of maize crops. They are just so perfect

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This is good, I liked how it was all once one sentence and not 3 joined ones. Worked well.