Comments : Our Circus Tree

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I had to read it a few times, I love it.
    I remember caving initials in to a tree
    with a big heart around it now and forever
    I love trees and if only they could speak.
    They have a lot of stories to tell.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Brilliant! Stellar! takes the breath away. I was deeply imagining the real situation in that spot of actions. Nicely penned Hannah

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    Hannah, AWESOME!

    Your skills as a novelist are so obvious here. I like this so very much.

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Amazing write!

    You have a real talent for these short pieces.
    The visual about 2 trees forming a heart almost made my heart melt (yeah, I'm a sensitive dude).

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Lovely story you have here. I enjoyed reading this. Great job, Hannah :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lioness

    Brilliant and beautiful!

    Awesome write! I am always loving your work!

    x

  • Oh, this is sad, but also really beautiful.

    One minor thing:

    'Remembrence' should be 'Remembrance' I believe.

    Anther 5/5