Comments : Sins of Lovers

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The heart is very fragile and easily can be
    broken. Somehow we find a reason to forgive. However, there comes a time
    we need to put our happiness first and
    let go
    a beautiful poem and written with so
    much elegance

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    Ah, love, love, why must you be so tough,
    tough to find in someone who is worth?

    interesting read, I have to say that the way this poem is structure surprised me.. I thought that perhaps it had syllable count but then I count some syllables and I found that it wasn't. So then I thought, perhaps its counting words, but haha. At the end I gave up and I just enjoyed the read. Well written.

    • 5 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you my friend.

  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Wooooow I do agree, I too love the way this poem is structured, and its beautifully written. Awesome job:)

    • 5 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you my friend. This means a lot to me.

  • 5 years ago

    by Siham

    Breathtaking poem, you left me speechless.
    5/5 excellent

  • 4 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Wow this poem is kinda painful to read since i went through this in a way in my past but overall this poem is VERY well written and it shows the talent of the poet by the diction he/she writes and the way the images pop out and call to you in this poem both the emotions and the images came into view beautifully! :) 5/5

    Queen Ash