This is beautiful... New day... new sunrise... makes me vision a purplish orange sun, while sipping coffee.... love this form... very pretty piece!

Such a lovely picture this Haiku has formed in my mind! An interesting form and you have used it perfectly to describe the start of a day..excellent!

I love this post haiku, the description and the imaginary of starting a new day while the waves touches the rocks is beautiful.

5/5

Wow Steven!!! You know so many formats, you are a real poetry lover!

I loved the tranquil mood in which this little poem left me. Such peace can be found in simple scenes like you just painted it.

Really well done, my friend,

5/5 Ingrid