Desperate (Haiku)

by Lioness   Jul 18, 2012


Waterfalls gushing
sounds relaxing, except when
I'm busting to pee.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Haha, this is fantastic (:

  • 5 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Hi there my fellow Aussie!

    I read your poetry often but I've been a bit slack in the commenting department. At the moment I have a massive fascination with short poetry so when I saw you had a haiku posted I couldn't resist dropping by to your page.

    I must say, I totally didn't expect the last line but it made me smile due to the rawness you presented lol. By raw I mean it was honest and straight to the point. I guess I should learn to expect the unexpected from you huh.

    Nice little read for a laugh!
    Mel

  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    Lol hehe this made me smile. I think you have a great sense of humor and the fact you can write something amusing is a talent because most poets fail to be funny but you succeed.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Lol Liz. You're awesome :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    He heheLoveddddd it!