Oh I love your nature pieces.... this made me feel as if I was sitting under a waterfall.... I felt like I was in a fantasy scene.... devoured by glitter dust!! You just took me to pixie land with this poem Jenni!!! LOVE IT
Beautiful haiku, Jenni. I enjoyed reading this. Keep writing :)
4 years ago
This is very beautiful and the imagery is fantastic.
The first stanza means it is night as you see the moon reflections. I love the moon rays as it shows how bright the moon is and I can imagine the stars trying to shine behind clouds but the mist means the grass is damp and the rain is going to fall. I can also maybe imagine a beach with the night time as peaceful as you write it.
Dragonflies are a nice touch with the mist. I love that they whisper. But the way you worded this can make anyone feel at peace. The word timberland really brings out the poem here. Now all I see is a wooded area with all the creatures stirring and whipsers calm the night air. While the rain starts to fall. You bring such a simple piece to life. 5/5