Comments : Cascade (Double Haiku)

  • 5 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Awesome jen. You did a great job on this double haiku and the imagery is fantastic!!
    :)
    Lostlove

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Dudeeeee you fricken nailed it. This was gorgeous jen. Well done

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Fantastic job Jenni, add to my fav

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    You have done a really good job with these, I love when the word glisten appears in a poem, it gives such a powerful impact and for me it usually creates the image instantly.

    Nice work :) x

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    You done wonderful on this double haiku. It has fantastic imagery and I keep reading it over and over. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh I love this haiku, so beautiful and I love the word cascade. It sounds so relaxing!!!

    x

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh I love your nature pieces.... this made me feel as if I was sitting under a waterfall.... I felt like I was in a fantasy scene.... devoured by glitter dust!! You just took me to pixie land with this poem Jenni!!! LOVE IT

  • 5 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I remember a while ago you said to me you suck at formed hmmm ...

    How wrong was you this is amazing :)

  • 5 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I remember a while ago you said to me you suck at formed hmmm ...

    How wrong was you this is amazing :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Beautiful haiku, Jenni. I enjoyed reading this. Keep writing :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is very beautiful and the imagery is fantastic.

    The first stanza means it is night as you see the moon reflections. I love the moon rays as it shows how bright the moon is and I can imagine the stars trying to shine behind clouds but the mist means the grass is damp and the rain is going to fall. I can also maybe imagine a beach with the night time as peaceful as you write it.

    Dragonflies are a nice touch with the mist. I love that they whisper. But the way you worded this can make anyone feel at peace. The word timberland really brings out the poem here. Now all I see is a wooded area with all the creatures stirring and whipsers calm the night air. While the rain starts to fall. You bring such a simple piece to life. 5/5