Comments : Drawing on the pumpkin

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Khalid! I didn't know this was your write in the contest...sooooo creative you used all the p words in one poem!! Loved it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great write, Khalid! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This poem reminds me of Halloween
    children all dressed up, having fun
    carving the pumpkins. beautiful write
    Khalid

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Like Dagmar said, this reminds me of Halloween. Kids dressed up as pirates and ghosts, and prince/princesses... all carving pumpkins at their party. I loved how you used all the "P" words from the contest.

    Great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like how this poem has an ironic twisted reality to it. I can see how things relate to each other in the mind of a child and innocence is the school of thought that imagination belongs too... Sometimes reality is more beautiful that way.