"This pain in my chest hurts-way less than I wish it would
and yet more than I thought it could"
These are my favorite lines. So relatable for me, it flows nicely! Great poem! 5/5
~Shades of Gray

I agree with shades of grey those were my favorite lines as well great write

This is short but deep, the rhymes work well to add to the flow, the emotion and sadness here was not too much but just enough to give the essence needed...

lovely
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