Smiles (Tanka)

by Khalid   Jul 30, 2012

The more smiles you show
The more lovers you gather
The more times you meet
and the stronger is your goal
One for all and all for one

* Syllables 5/7/5/7/7


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  • 6 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    I absolutely loved every line!
    my favorite part was

    "All for one and one for all"
    Its a beautiful and powerful way to end this poem!

    So strong and well structured!

    5.5 from me

  • 6 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nice message of truth , fitted the style well.

    • 6 years ago

      by Khalid

      Thank you honey.

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Very good, the syllable count is right on!

    I like this poem. Smiles!

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I obsolutely love it