Comments : Believe

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Nothing comes true, outside belief. In agreement, oneness is found.

  • 11 years ago

    by Roronoa Zoro

    Amazing write :)

  • Very nicely said.
    Strong ending.

    One thing I would suggest:
    Use the correct spelling - don't use 'text-lingo' such as 'u' for 'you' etc - it tends to lose its professionalism (for lack of a better word at the moment)

    Typo:
    'constituion' - 'constitution'

    Well done! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Reflections touched by happiness.
    Like stars burning in a summer sky.
    Setting the sky ablaze with ideals.

    - adored this line, very unique imagery. Loved it.

    Nice work on the poem, keep writing with the inspiring thoughts!