Gud thought i like it

We pollute not only Mother Nature but also our won bodies, sometimes without realizing it.

Very strong poem to put this issue in the spotlight. Good job!

The human kind eventually is destroying
the air we breathe
nice write

I LOVE this!!

The message is clear and concise - and a damn good message to spread word about!

The flow was really good except for that third stanza. Though I see its purpose, it kind of stuck out like a sore thumb.... And the last line of that third stanza -- 'feeling' doesn't really work - perhaps try 'feel at all healthy' or even just 'feel' actually...

Great rhyming throughout, and a very powerful write.

Well penned. 5/5

I love the way this peom is structured, very nice piece Khalid
5/5 stunning