Comments : Kentucky (Haiku)

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Nice i really enjoyed it

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Lovely Haiku Hannah. I love Kentucky, most of my relatives are from there so this made me smile :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Got..excited..thinking...this..would..be..about..fried..chicken.

    Sigh

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Oh this is beautiful Hannah. I adore
    wild flowers, it's such great joy to watch
    them throughout the year with such
    enormous energy

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    A very enjoyable read. Great haiku, Hannah. :)

  • A beautiful little piece. Need I say more?

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    I love this piece, what beautiful images and a really fresh feel of nature and Kentucky!

    One thing though is I can't come up with the syllables to be an actual haiku.... I have an "accent" on here to some people and count funny so maybe thats it.. lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem is refreshing.

    Being that I'm from Australia I have no idea about Kentucky and yet you managed to describe it so beautifully in such a short piece. I feel like you're a poet who knows how to use all the readers senses, this poem had scent, it had a lovely sight. What more could you ask for in a Haiku.

    I found the syllable count off myself but as Britt said being that we are from all different places of the world sometimes accents can cause a problem when counting.

    Lovely poem none the less
    Mel

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Love this! The imagery jumps right out of the screen. I seriously want to go outside and pick flowers right now, and when imagery can evoke emotions and physically motivate you, then it's very special. Great work, Hannah!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well you took me to Kentucky! Now I feel like I want to go there... NOW! Because I love nature as you know, blackberries are yummy, and wild flowers are divine.. I could picture myself basking in the flowers eating berries and to me that would be the PERFECT vacation that I really need right now... If this Haiku was on the brochure of Welcome to Kentucky and what it has to offer, you would attract a ton of tourists! <3