Oh sweetheart...I am so sorry for you:(

You are so young still, to miss someone so vital already now is beyond my imagination.

Just know he is there for you always, as your guardian angel. Please believe this is really true..

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Great ending to a very sad piece, you dad must have been very proud of you, you show you had a great bond in this.

Lovely raw emotion in this and the rhymes work really well.

regards and take care.

I thougt this poem was great very touching i lost a great friend to death i know how much it hurts to lose someone you love and care about im very sorry for you please find the good in life and keep writing peace and love