NAKED APHRODITE!!!

by Robert Gardiner   Aug 6, 2012


NAKED APHRODITE!!!

Rising, from the sea, Naked, a Vision, of Such Loveliness,
Perfection Personified, Pleasure, Incarnate,
The Embodiment, of Grace and Femininity,
Enraptured, she leaves me, Enamored, to Ecstasy,
Spelled, by Her Charms, a Flutter, all of me,
Exhilarated, Engrossed, in Affinity.
What Rapture, Her Presence is.
Wrapped, I am, within, Her Magic.

Naked Goddess, Your Body's, Divine,
Amorous thoughts of you, Dance, in my Mind.
So Seductive, Your Siren Song,
Your Naked Splendor, Transfixing, to Gaze Upon.
So Lovely, Your Silhouette,
Every Inch, of Your Body, just Flawless.
Beckoned, I am, to Your Shore,
Fascinated, by your Body's Every Contour.

You Define Beauty, Your Face, a Lovely Sight,
In concert, with Your Body, a Rapturous, Delight.
Such Heaven, the Beauteous, Bare Body, of you.
Haunted, I am, By Your Each and Every Hue.
A Fancy, you have, My Heart,
A Flamed, My Soul, Each and Every Part.
I'm Lost, within, the Majesty, of you.
Naked Enchantress, Such Rhapsody, You Induce.

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

As Always, your comments and votes greatly appreciated, thank you!!!

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  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Thought I best re-read it as you have edited it.

    It is very tight now, still exceptional descriptive narrative used, I know exactly what she looks like. It is almost a song now Robert

    great write

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Wow, I saw her as I read the poem..a rare beauty as they are not made anymore.

    I agree with Darren on the comma's. I always wanted to tell you about it!

    Well done, though:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Great idea for a poem robert,
    What I would say is there seems to be a lot of commas, it breaks the flow up somewhat.

    ex line 1
    Rising, from the sea, Naked, a Vision, of Such Loveliness,

    how about

    Rising from the sea naked, a vision of such loveliness,

    (I dropped half the capitals as well)

    That aside, your passion for this is evident.
    You use some strong adjectives that really show how you truly marvel over her.

    regards.

  • 11 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    I loved the use of a number of adjectives in this poem, well deserved for the Goddess of Love. This greek Olympian beauty has more beauty to her than one can define with the adjectives we can find in an ordinary dictionary. Wonderful personification.

  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    I like this piece. It has good word flow and overall it's easy to read. Good job ((5))

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