So great cocktail of your collab. All the poem tell the effect of action and reaction (or response). Both stanza are telling that but with a different style. Great work. I loved it.

Oh wow...this was so different you guys. I loved the uniqueness of this piece :) well done collab and welk thought out!

I like this piece, it was interesting and it reminded me of a piece that I never posted because the flipping( of the words, twist? I don't know how to call it) did not work very well on mine, however, in this poem I feel that it did.

This line is one of my favorite:

"When I look at your picture, I feel you
I feel you when I look at your picture."

Well done.

To my darling,

When I'm alone, I think of you
I think of you when I'm alone

When I cry, I remember you
When I remember you I cry

When I smile, I miss you
I miss you when I smile

When I sleep, in my dreams, I see you
I see you in my dreams when I sleep

When I look at your picture, I feel you
I feel you when I look at your picture.

When I look around, I can't find you
I can't find you when I look around.

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I love this flipping action here. It's quite unique. It's a nice opening to the poem.

To my sweetheart,

When you feel alone
and think of me,
I am thinking of you too.
When you cry remembering me,
I am kissing away your tears.
When you smile missing me,
I am not far, I'm here.
When you sleep
and dream of me,
I hold you tightly in my arms.
When you look at my picture
and see my face,
please know I am by your side.
When you look around
and can't find me,
I am always in your heart.

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I like how this is written in a different style to above.. it gives the impression it is written by a different person (which it indeed might be) - and therefore the lover of the original letter writer..?
I also like the similarity between the two stanzas - implying they think along the same lines..?

Our love remains forever,
reunited we will be.
But I will live inside your heart
until your back with me.

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My interpretation is that one of these people are deceased and it's the memory/ghost/angel of the person who is writing the letter... (?) in order to comfort their lover who remains alive.

Overall;
A very uniquely written piece.
I don't even have any suggestions of improvement - it's great the way it is.
A fantastic collaborative work!

5/5