You seem like a very happy person Ravi and...this poem is a very happy poem. I see you have joined Raven's Haven so maybe just ask a member there to go over your english with you...there's just some very minor adjustments needed. I did enjoy reading your poem....welcome to P&Q.

I do agree with Hellon, it is a nice one!!! keep it up!!!

Thnx lee..so nice of u..

Short but unique poem, I can appreciate the thoughts that are express here. The truth is we always have available rooms within our hearts to love and extend love to others.

Lovely write....

Thanks autuumnbree..it was grt to be appreciated..