I couldn't quite get into this, just because it wasn't my type of read that's all. The words you used made an impression that there are two sides to this story. Nonetheless, well done.

Mouse.

This poem is really interesting. I see a few different struggles tied together here. The struggle of ones self, of love, and of others. You tied this piece together nicely. Showing what affects ones struggle through life, and how suddenly an inner war can be lost. And I definitely enjoyed the language used. Great work!

This poem is really interesting. I see a few different struggles tied together here. The struggle of ones self, of love, and of others. You tied this piece together nicely. Showing what affects ones struggle through life, and how suddenly an inner war can be lost. And I definitely enjoyed the language used. Great work!