Comments : Am I valuable?

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Do I have to answer the title?
    I will yes the atom is important, cause if it wasnt there the multi-element alloy will not be there too.
    That means even the smallest thing in this world is important:)
    Love this piece great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Khalid, very awesome haiku!! I love the use of atom instead of person or body. Words like that make haikus so interesting! :) I love your last line, a simple statement gave this little poem such strength!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww, this is actually quite a sad poem from you because in this one it stands out that you feel so small and unoticed int his world, and you used this atom to explain that in your poem. Nice job with this.

  • This piece is actually quite sad.
    I like the question and how the poem doesn't really answer it, it leaves the reader to determine the answer for themselves.
    Good thought-provoking piece!

    I think many can relate to this.
    We, as individuals are small entities among millions, billions and sometimes it's difficult to see how we are important in this world.
    But remember, that it takes just one person to make a difference - give others inspiration to make a difference, or simply just to lead an important mission.

    That last line - Perfect! So powerful!

    Fantastic write! 5/5