This sounds real bad..I can understand you are
going through some difficult time and I pray that
you get through this difficult time...take care..

This is dripping with sorrow Wm. But I am happy to read your beautiful, smooth rhyme once again. I voted days ago but didnt know how to comment, still don't,

I have missed reading you.

Thank you Connie,

Thank you Connie,

This is really full of emotions..it touched something inside of me..I hope you'll be okay..pain is really inevitable in life but its up to us to endure it and find what were looking for..it has a nice rhyme too..nice poem

Beautiful

Awhhhh! So much feeling!!!! This poem is very touching! I felt so much emotion in this write!,

This is such a beautiful, heartfelt write that it almost moved me to tears. I particularly loved the fourth line in your poem when you talk about life's ups and downs and say that there is, "no reason for its rhyme." I think that it is a beautiful way to describe life and one that every single person can relate to. Comparing life to poetry is genius. Well done for bringing your reader into the poem and making them feel what you want them to. It takes a good author to move his/her reader and you do it exceptionally well. I think I will remember that line for a very long time!

Thanks for sharing. 5/5 from me.

Such a sad telling tale.

All the best, Em

Wow; I was not left disappointed..
Though Sad this is such a touching poem; with real depth.

"A heart neglected and abused,
Still softened for my touch,
She only wanted to be loved,
Is that asking life to much."

This stanza followed by the ending..

"She never ask to much of life,
As others do I say,
I'm lost without her for my smile,
And empty are my days."

Seriously made this this poem everything that it was for me.

Keep writing, and I will keep reading!
Jenn

Beautiful piece that wrenches the heart. A sensitive tale of woe and lost love. How true that there seems to be no rhme nor reason. Loved it. Milly x

such emotions dripping from each verse. beautiful!

Such a beautiful sad write....

Heartwrending and full of emotion. I'm so sorry for your loss and well done in writing this <3