Comments : Broken

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This sounds real bad..I can understand you are
    going through some difficult time and I pray that
    you get through this difficult time...take care..

  • 5 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This is dripping with sorrow Wm. But I am happy to read your beautiful, smooth rhyme once again. I voted days ago but didnt know how to comment, still don't,

    I have missed reading you.

  • 5 years ago

    by William Mae

    Thank you Connie,

  • 5 years ago

    by William Mae

    Thank you Connie,

  • 5 years ago

    by Lyndy

    This is really full of emotions..it touched something inside of me..I hope you'll be okay..pain is really inevitable in life but its up to us to endure it and find what were looking for..it has a nice rhyme too..nice poem

  • 4 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Beautiful

  • 4 years ago

    by Tori

    Awhhhh! So much feeling!!!! This poem is very touching! I felt so much emotion in this write!,

  • 4 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is such a beautiful, heartfelt write that it almost moved me to tears. I particularly loved the fourth line in your poem when you talk about life's ups and downs and say that there is, "no reason for its rhyme." I think that it is a beautiful way to describe life and one that every single person can relate to. Comparing life to poetry is genius. Well done for bringing your reader into the poem and making them feel what you want them to. It takes a good author to move his/her reader and you do it exceptionally well. I think I will remember that line for a very long time!

    Thanks for sharing. 5/5 from me.

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Such a sad telling tale.

    All the best, Em

  • 11 months ago

    by Jenn

    Wow; I was not left disappointed..
    Though Sad this is such a touching poem; with real depth.

    "A heart neglected and abused,
    Still softened for my touch,
    She only wanted to be loved,
    Is that asking life to much."

    This stanza followed by the ending..

    "She never ask to much of life,
    As others do I say,
    I'm lost without her for my smile,
    And empty are my days."

    Seriously made this this poem everything that it was for me.

    Keep writing, and I will keep reading!
    Jenn

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful piece that wrenches the heart. A sensitive tale of woe and lost love. How true that there seems to be no rhme nor reason. Loved it. Milly x