This is really full of emotions..it touched something inside of me..I hope you'll be okay..pain is really inevitable in life but its up to us to endure it and find what were looking for..it has a nice rhyme too..nice poem
This is such a beautiful, heartfelt write that it almost moved me to tears. I particularly loved the fourth line in your poem when you talk about life's ups and downs and say that there is, "no reason for its rhyme." I think that it is a beautiful way to describe life and one that every single person can relate to. Comparing life to poetry is genius. Well done for bringing your reader into the poem and making them feel what you want them to. It takes a good author to move his/her reader and you do it exceptionally well. I think I will remember that line for a very long time!