Comments : Cure for unhappiness

  • Our piggy bank love,

    ^^
    'Piggy bank'
    Must be a favourite line of yours.
    Sort a signature line, I suppose.
    Interpretation:
    A fulfilling love; collective; always adding to it, building on to it - GROWING.

    cure of sorrow and sadness,

    ^^
    Is it ever!
    Love = happiness. Happiness is a sure-fire cure for negative emotions.

    full of butter flies

    ^^
    'butter flies' is one word - 'butterflies'
    My interpretation:
    The feeling that the loves instils in us - nervousness, excitment, joy.... the list goes on.

    Another fantastic write from you! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Max

    Hmm
    I always like your short pieces
    putting much emotion is short lines is a skill not everybody have =)

    Keep it up =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is very unique piece Khalid
    I love the idea with the piggy bank.
    I wished money could buy happiness

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like any poem that has butterflies in it, and butterflies alone make me happy, so this haiku is a winner in my book!

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Truly simple and remarkable. The title caught me by surprise and I love it. Magnificent piece

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Wow... this poem creates a simple and amicable imagery and I loved the words you have used to describe love as a cure for sorrow... Cute cuz of butterflies.... I find them serene.... pleasant write:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Siham

    Perfectly written 5/5