Comments : I Dare You to Love Me (kinda long)

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephen

    Aww yes! This is absolutely beautiful. I loved reading it!

    Go ahead, tell me things
    Things that I've already heard before
    Go ahead, smile at me
    So, my body can start to feel warm
    Go ahead, kiss me
    So I can forget all the hurt you've done
    Go ahead, hold me
    And I'll once again think you're the one

    ---I loved the way you started this poem with that first stanza. It carried such emotion and sent such a wide spread message that I kept with me through the rest of the read. Sort of like, I've heard it before, you've broken me before, but go ahead, I want you to love me!! Beautiful!

    "Pull and twist my heartstrings like you do
    Even after what we've been through
    I know in my heart, one thing is true
    My soul is always gonna yearn for you"

    --The way you ended it, what a perfect ending to this amazing piece of your soul!

  • 11 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Thank you.

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Wow!!!!! i really loved this poem and the kicker was that i was listening to "Beautiful Liar" lol

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    "Until a million days after the day of black sun" I really liked this line, it was one of the best I have ever heard, I adore it. Great job, I can't wait to read more of your stuff, wonderful job, I loved this poem sooo much, and there's no length limit to a poem, specially one this good

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Loved it, very intriguing.