Comments : The Memory

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very nice... nice description of nature's features... it is enchanting... I liked every bit of the poem... there are few typos though... but good.work:)5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    A beautiful piece. I don't know if it was meant to be melancholy, but I felt a twinge of sadness as I read it and I thought that was lovely because so many poems are just so blunt and obvious that there's nothing to figure out in the poem, but you really allow the reader to feel whatever comes up for them.

    Good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading your piece...the repetition of the lines gives it a natural rhythm! Well penned!