Whispering morning...(Haiku and Collab)

Lovely! How can something so short be this good?

Lovely! So short but speaks volumes. This a beautiful haiku, written with words choosen carefully that couldn't have describe it better than this.

Nature is quiet vast in its abstract perceptions but not everyone can elegantly imbue its natural beauty. So good job with this for penning such a creative piece.

Will love to see more nature poems from you. Keep doing what you do, you're great at it.
Aapke piece bohot acha hai. ;-)) ..

Little birds whisper
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I love the way you have captured this beautiful imagery of birds, words so carefully chosen allowing the reader to clearly identify little birds and to hear them whispering, so deep and inspiring!

God's pleasant note for today,
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Simply beautiful!
I love how you added the creator in this piece and have constructed a strong link between the birds whisper to God's notes. I find this highly thoughtful and imaginative. I also admire the specific flow of emotion carrying this light tone across the first two lines.

the worms all scarper.
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A wonderful way to close and conclude a haiku!
I love how you have included the mother nature process and this light tone is turned to the beats of realism and truth!

Like Lebanese phoenix stated I have never read a collaboration haiku and I really enjoyed reading this one, it was beautifully composed and through reading this it is clear that both your talents, imagination and creativity work wonders united!

Great work!

5.5 from me

Awe this is so cute, made me smile.
5/5

I like the story that you have told.
The humour is also a nice touch.

I particularly like how not one part of this seems forced, or restricted by the form, it all works as if it naturally progessed word by word.

Well done to you both.
Five/Five