Comments : Goodbye Papa

  • 5 years ago

    by Alanis

    Oh Ingrid. This poem brings back such memories. its a lovely poem I'm sure you will cherish in your heart forever.

  • 5 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    What a wonderful, wonderful piece Ingrid.
    It has a bought a tear to my eye.

    I'm just so sorry for your loss and your poem reflects your feelings at this time beautifully..
    This piece is truly a treasure and something very precious. I am in awe of this.
    Just a very loving poem from your Heart..
    Your Dad I'm sure is very proud of you.. xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    Simple heartfelt and uncomplicated, great tribute to him, great strength to you.
    Awesome

  • 5 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Thanks, Ravens:)

  • 5 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Nice tribute ingrid..and as peter said, brought a tear to my eye..

  • 5 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    So sad to know you have lost your father but awesome knowing today he is sitting with the father. Peace to you and yours dear Ingrid in the days and years that follow. One is never gone if they live inside of your heart. XXX

  • 5 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Oh Ingrid! I'm so so sorry about your loss! Losing a parent is always difficult :/
    But this was a lovely tribute dedicated for your father and I enjoyed reading it. It brought a tear to my eye.
    I'm here if you need to talk and you are in my prayers! * hugs big time *
    ((5)) ~Harlea

  • 5 years ago

    by Rebecca Davies

    Absolutely beautiful ingrid..

    such a lovely tribute, i have tears in my eyes ingrid, i can tell your father was very dear to you.

    he will be very proud of you

    my thoughts are with both you and your family at this hard time.

    and may your brave and courageous father rest in peace xx

  • 5 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    So sad to hear, to lose one so dear.

    Well done Ingrid, your heart spoke through your poem.

    Ken

  • 5 years ago

    by Mister 47

    No words can ever say things that make u feel better, just want to say i am very sorry that you lost his company in this life ... just to hope that god will really keep him in his heart .... and may you find some happiness knowing that he finished his dance ... leaving behind a great person like you , and the rest of your family , he will never die he will live in you for ever ... god bless u and bless him dear :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Ingrid de Klerck

      Thank you, Moucha.. Your words of comfort are appreciated much:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    May I first of all offer my condolances to you..

    Goodbye Papa

    As you lie there
    silently, asleep it seems
    I see the journey
    written on your face
    Hedonist without compare
    with so much stories to share.

    Gone..

    after a short, but fierce fight
    Partying on, I am sure, with delight
    with the ones that await you
    in the land without time.

    It's all I can offer in way of critique...I just thing by separating the two stanzas with the word gone it lets the reader breath and take noet in between? Your first stanza is obviously about his passing but the second gives hope about his future in the afterworld...hope this makes sense to you...?

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    Oh my God, Ingrid... my deep condolences to you. I am sure he is comfortable now up there. That is a heartwrenching piece, flowing good, from your heart, it sounds... Beautiful.

  • 5 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Ingrid, I have lost my father too in 11/8...my consolations, sweetheart. This piece made me tear so awfully...

    RIP

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    A beautiful dedication to your father ingrid... it just brought tears in my eyes... I have just nothing after reading this because I saw your emotions truly spread across the poem and your father is indeed resting in peace dear with all our prayers covering him with happiness all around...

  • 5 years ago

    by Nema

    My condolences to you Ingrid. I'm so sorry to hear about your loss.

    There are no fair words to describe how touching this poem is, it's beautiful. Beautifully sad, though.

    I've missed you and your writings a lot.
    Take care of the world after him Ingrid, he would want you to do that =)

    Write on~

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Ingrid I'm so sorry for your loss.....this was a beautiful and so simple tribute. Each word just got the heartstring. Take care...

  • 5 years ago

    by Amy

    A beautiful dedication, indeed. I am sorry for your loss.

  • 5 years ago

    by mandy

    This was a good poem, real and full of love. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 5 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Sorry, just noticed this one. My condolences for your loss. Tough to see one's loved one leave the world. Beautifully written, sad but one you will always cherish.

  • 5 years ago

    by Faithless

    What a lovely tribute to your father, beautifully crafted in a poetry form. I'm sure your dad would have be delighted to hear you read this from the heaven above. You've painted such a delicate farewell for him, it's neither sad nor happiness in it but instead I feel that this poem is about accepting one's death rather than grieve over it.
    A nice way to stir the soul.

    Take care
    *Hugs*
    Azzza