It was short , long time i did not read anything from you , the second line was a bit icky i dont know how it sounded to my ear it should be better , the meaning i liked , liked the idea of dreaming ... breathing just wanted to say , we dream so when we wake up , we make them come true , sometimes we wonder what is the dream :) our life , or our sleep :) just wondering :) great one dear :)

It was short , long time i did not read anything from you , the second line was a bit icky i dont know how it sounded to my ear it should be better , the meaning i liked , liked the idea of dreaming ... breathing just wanted to say , we dream so when we wake up , we make them come true , sometimes we wonder what is the dream :) our life , or our sleep :) just wondering :) great one dear :)

Hi I have recorded your review on the link below,

just something our club thought of

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0KxiwtxsyWN

hope you like it

Awesome write a lot of emotion spills out on to this page , such a great idea penned to perfection

Ive always liked poems that rhyme, and this one is definitely one of them. You did real good in writing this one, the lenght, emotions and all that. Keep it up.

HI i thougt trhis poem was good i like how you are dreaming of happiness we all want that all in all great job