Electric Kiss

by Lioness   Sep 17, 2012


I never fully understood
the meaning of the word
safe until you held me in
your arms for the first time,

at that point I knew God existed.

I can feel lightning strikes
my heart whenever we would
kiss and the sound of thunder
echoes throughout my body.

I've always loved that sound.

The vibrations run beneath
my skin and time ceases to exist
whenever you are near me.

They say that lightning never strikes
the same place twice, but in this case

I welcome it.

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  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I just melted. Wow! This is superbly sweet!

  • 5 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! What a beautiful poem... and congratulations on the win! This poem really deserved it <3

    I love the simplicity of this poem, but how meaningful and deep it is... I love how you describe the thunder and lightning you feel when you kiss this person... I found it interesting since lightning and thunder usually has a negative connotation, but in this case it's positive since it's describing the electricity you feel when you're close to this person.

    Great job <3

  • 5 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was so innovative and original, which it is hard to be when you are talking about a love poem since everything has already been said by one person or another lol but you managed it. Great write!

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    I just love this and congrats on your win liz and a deserved one...!!
    The way you have involved your passion of love with nature is truly amazing.... I am totally at awe with each word.... The poem has drawn such electrifying images afore me that I am left amazed..... I loved every bit of the passion instilled in you and the way you have given it a touch of abstract objects ...

    I never fully understood
    the meaning of the word
    safe until you held me in
    your arms for the first time,

    ^^^
    You managed to give it a subtle start which is refreshing... yes when you find that perfect one, your life unfolds the meanings of a lot of emotions... very soothing..

    at that point I knew God existed.

    ^^
    This one line verse seems apt..

    I can feel lightning strikes
    my heart whenever we would
    kiss and the sound of thunder
    echoes throughout my body.

    ^^

    True enough but describing it in an unusual and creative way is what makes it commendable... I could see sheer passion here...Makes me relate to it a lot... and you managed to describe it well...

    I've always loved that sound.

    ^^

    Brilliant(:

    The vibrations run beneath
    my skin and time ceases to exist
    whenever you are near me.

    ^^^

    Wonderful to the core.... your this verse gives me chills for the person I adore and is true to the word... I wonder how you could describe it so well...

    They say that lightning never strikes
    the same place twice, but in this case

    I welcome it.

    ^^

    Yes you are true about the fact but the end is just amazing... I am lost of words for that... But I truly must say it is amazingly amazing... You have defined love with a new emotion and that is wonderful.:-)

    Keep writing:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Amy

    Such a gorgeous write. Congrats!

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