Nice story! I do have some points:
"I came here a few moths ago" should be "I came here few months ago"
"Looking to start fresh and new" you have to clarify what to start, for example "to start a fresh and new love" or 'to start something fresh and new"
The words "most" and "close" don't rhyme in stanzas 5 & 8
The last stanza "on you face" should be "on your face".
The poem seems comparatively long but effective.
I enjoyed the flow.

This is so brilliant... yes the piece is too long though, it stills clings to read it till the end as it seems much of a story which you specified in the title:) And I loved the story behind and hope all gets well between you two... I loved the way you tried to rhyme it doing justice to a great extent and I would say that khalid sir said it all about the minor issues, else it is a sweet love story..

Well done brittany(:

This is so brilliant... yes the piece is too long though, it stills clings to read it till the end as it seems much of a story which you specified in the title:) And I loved the story behind and hope all gets well between you two... I loved the way you tried to rhyme it doing justice to a great extent and I would say that khalid sir said it all about the minor issues, else it is a sweet love story..

Well done brittany(:

This was a great poem, I loved the story and how it kept me intrigued. Your rhyming skills are strong. there was a lot of heart put into this poem.

the only line I didnt like was the force rhyme using the word grout.

you might revamp that!

5/5

Great story! you have a few misspelt words, but i totally blame the keyboard ;) you done a great job keeping my attention!