Comments : Crazy In love

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello

    I must make it my mission to read more love poetry on this site as poems like this remind me why I fell in love with words to begin with.
    I particularly like the first six lines - they are sublime.

    Excellent write. All the best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Absolutely beautiful. Falling in love is easy when it's with the right person. I hope to find my mr right.

    I see you in everything
    and dream of you always.
    ^^
    Beautiful opening and yes, when you must after someone or deeply love them they are everywhere and in everything.

    You are the wind
    against my skin
    and I hear your voice
    where there is only silence.
    ^^
    Love this part to be there again would be amazing. Imagery here is so serene and tranquil yet so full of deep emotional love.

    I may be crazy
    but if I am;
    then crazy I'm
    more than happy to be.
    ^^
    This is something I'd say so made me laugh a little in a good way. Love can send us in to crazy mode as I say if it's with the right person but in a good way. I'd love to find the person I love who loves me back for all my craziness too and just for being me.

    Because I am crazy in love
    and never want that to change
    ^^
    Beautiful ending and all the luck it doesn't stop.

    Great write, Em