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by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA Sep 25, 2012
Love, romance /
Fluttery heart beats;
Intrepid love scatters mind;
Recipe of love.
Smiles of pure elation;
Talk, hand in hand, for a time.
Date to last through the ages;
Anticipation released from you.
Tender kiss to say goodnight
Exuding happiness: two.
12/09/12*Club Weekly Challenge #2
"Date to last through the ages" creates a beautiful imagery and the beginning of a long lasting relationship.
The First Date couldn't be better described :D
by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA
Thank you (:
by Formidable Muse
Beautifully written and very, very clever. I find different styles of poetry hard to write, but you totally nailed this! (:
You know I can never critique your work; they're just so perfect and beautiful! This seems like a really tough challenge, just reading those forms already make my head spin, lol. Excellent.
by Ingrid de Klerck
Wow, so creative, Alisha!!!!
This is uplifting and heartwarming, a feel good poem if ever I saw one:)