Comments : Split

  • 11 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Super sweet I love the imagery and the sincerity that this poem process. I like that you admit that your love hasn't wither. I think it's really hard to be someone friend that was once a lover but It can work if there's two people who are capable of drawing a line and not cross over when its convenient for their needs. Excellent write

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    There are so much charm and sadness here, building up again and again. Like in real life one becomes two once more, a basic part of life when love stops or disagree in life.
    sadly a lot of us forget to reflct on this in daily life, a good poem once again