Comments : Destruction, In The Flames

  • 5 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    This is a very sad piece,full of emotions n anger..i know it hurts,a lot,when the one u love n trust the most deceive u...people may not realize,but when love turns hatred,thats very dangerous..
    Take care dear..stay strong.

  • 5 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    This is a very sad piece,full of emotions n anger..i know it hurts,a lot,when the one u love n trust the most deceive u...people may not realize,but when love turns hatred,thats very dangerous..
    Take care dear..stay strong.

  • 5 years ago

    by Marvellous

    A friend restores hope, not sorrow. Within every scar, healing dwells.

  • 5 years ago

    by Rohit Sapra

    I like these verses a lot because of its depth. Every word has a meaning and is able to stir the emotions so well.
    You are a good writer and never give up writing.

  • 5 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    Those who play wiht fire are always burned so therefore who ever hurt you so will be crisped....so sad and fillled with anger

  • 5 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    Power. I think that's a good word to discribe it. Anger in the sorrow of it. Definately a new favorate. 5/5 Loved It!

  • 4 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    This is really great. I love the title name. I like how you show that he tortures you from the core.
    good to know when you should stay away from someone to keep yourself from continuing to get hurt. I like your words you used to describe things. very unique

  • 4 years ago

    by Let It Be

    I love the metaphors and the details the're so detailed and i can feel just for a moment how you actually feel

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    Hey, I love this piece from you,
    what I have noticed is that you can pour your emotions in the words so well, you also give enough descriptions to know what's going on in the poem, but overall the emotions speak for themselves. The tone in the poem is very good too.

    5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by LostForWords

    Very good poem, the title reminded me of a book I once read (: 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by tainted melody

    Wow! I could really see the emotion in poem! Very nice work. 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by The Lady of Shalott

    I love this one, it's my favorite...I felt every word as if it were my own. Wonderful, keep it up. 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Lemon

    I like the length of this poem, it allows for a lot of detail, a lot of description about how the narrator feels (I say the narrator, I don't know whether you are writing as yourself or as someone else). There is a lot of power and emotion in this poem (I like that, angry poems are awesome xD). Great write :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Fear2love

    This is a sad yet beautiful piece. You write to paint pictures in people minds and I enjoy it :)

  • 4 years ago

    by kaycat

    You are AMAZING!!! I love every one of your poems xx <3

  • 4 years ago

    by kaycat

    You are AMAZING!!! I love every one of your poems xx <3

  • 3 years ago

    by Timothy

    Very intense. Good write/read.