Love is a losing game

by NativePrincess23   Sep 27, 2012


Love is a losing game

That feeling in my chest when I see you can't be controlled.
I get the best Feeling in the world when you say hi or bye to me, or even smile, because I Know even if just for a split second, I've crossed your mind and that makes me grow Fonder of you each and every day.
So here I am writing this to you to express what I Cannot say to you in person. I wish you could hear every word I write on this paper.
I've waited too long to tell you and now you've moved on, I don't understand explain to Me, How you have all the time in the world to go out of your way and make Other girls that don't know you as well as I know you fall in love with you, but you Don't have enough time to pay attention to the girl who already is. The same girl, That's been with you through every storm, that same girl who let you cry on her Shoulder, when those same girls you go out of your way and get them to love you Breaks your heart. No matter what happens I'll always be there for you. Just Promise me you won't forget me, promise you won't stop saying hi or giving me that Smile in the hallways because I look forward to those, they make my day. You will Never understand my pain until your hearts been broken, just like mine has been. My Heart is not the only thing broken my soul is too, the pain is unbearable I can't
Help but want to cry. Cry until I can't breathe until my lungs give out. The worst Way to miss someone is when they are right beside you and you're wondering if they Miss you the way you miss them. I'm standing right next to you looking at you and hoping u gets a clue and yet you don't. The Insane thing is I miss you like Crazy I can honestly say I'm officially missing you. hopefully I'll be able to Pick up and heal the shattered pieces of what's left of my heart but I'm not Sure that's even possible because in order to put it back together. I'll need all the pieces I left of those pieces where we stood when u gave me that Devastating news

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  • Ok, your arrangement needs work and I have provided a suggestion for this so... if you don't like my suggested format, just ignore it, but I have altered the errors of capitalisation and other punctuation throughout this. Feel free to alter this suggestion as you wish, just quickly altered your original format:

    That feeling in my chest
    when I see you can't be controlled.

    I get the best feeling in the world
    when you say hi or bye to me, or even smile,
    because I know even if,
    just for a split second,
    I've crossed your mind
    that makes me grow fonder
    of you each and every day.

    So here I am writing this to you
    to express what I cannot say to you in person.
    I wish you could hear every word I write on this paper.

    I've waited too long to tell you
    and now you've moved on.
    I don't understand, explain to me
    how you have all the time in the world
    to go out of your way and
    make other girls that don't know you
    as well as I know you
    fall in love with you,
    but you don't have enough time
    to pay attention to the girl who already is.

    The same girl,
    that's been with you through every storm,
    that same girl,
    who let you cry on her shoulder,
    when those same girls you go out of your way,
    and get them to love you,
    break your heart.
    No matter what happens
    I'll always be there for you.

    Just promise me you won't forget me,
    promise you won't stop saying hi
    or giving me that smile in the hallways
    because I look forward to those,
    they make my day.

    You will never understand my pain
    until your heart's been broken,
    just like mine has been.
    My Heart is not the only thing broken,
    my soul is too.
    The pain is unbearable.
    I can't help but want to cry;
    cry until I can't breathe
    until my lungs give out.

    The worst way to miss someone
    is when they are right beside you
    and you're wondering if
    they miss you the way you miss them.

    I'm standing right next to you looking at you
    and hoping you get a clue
    and yet you don't.

    The insane thing is
    I miss you like crazy.
    I can honestly say I'm officially missing you.
    Hopefully I'll be able to pick up and heal the shattered pieces
    of what's left of my heart
    but I'm not sure that's even possible
    because in order to put it back together
    I'll need all the pieces I left of those pieces where we stood
    when you gave me that devastating news...

    Besides all that - I really like this piece. Love your raw emotion and honesty. 5/5

    Oh, and welcome to PnQ. (: