Comments : Spring's Early Hours

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    Awesome write Alisha. Enjoyed reading.

  • 5 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow Alisha, That's beautiful...

    Such beauty in such a short piece...

    Lovely
    xxx

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    This one is so refreshing... I love reading poems about nature and the reason is always when you can visualise a beautiful scenery through your eyes and it pleases you without you being actually in such an enviroment... And your poem has that... I liked the words you have used to describe this blissful moment and touch of nature...It just captivates your soul to land in a world of freshness and tranquility....

    Like a wisp of wind
    or scattering of leaves
    winter's chill departs
    to allow spring's reprieve.

    ^^
    Wonderful start... You have depicted such beautiful examples to show how the snow withers and melts away along with its chill to welcome the month of colorful beauty... Just amazing^^

    Warmth embraces all
    from human to flowers;
    like a kiss of affection,
    we journey September's hours.

    This verse gives you the true feel of spring... How the soft warmth is felt and everyone loves it to experience the dawn of a new month^^

    I loved the entire piece and just amazing(:

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    Sorry extra post... using my phone so:(

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

    Sorry... extra post

  • 5 years ago

    by Amreen

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  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Alisha you have done something very rare. You made me like a rhyming nature poem lol..

    This was beautiful, your rhymes weren't an over used rhyme, they were some what unique and helped the flow a lot...

    I found your imagery to be flawless and this turned out to be a quick beautiful poem!

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    "Kiss of affection" now there is a beaut of wording right there... Oh I do love this poem... comforting piece!

  • 5 years ago

    by Amy

    You penned the transition from a season of death and cold to a season of rebirth. I love Spring and the blooming of the flowers then. The imagery is just so beautiful with just a few words used.

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Alisha this is beautiful. A little rhyme and nature in a lovely little poem. Nice work.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Lately, I've been really digging nature poems...and this is one of the ones I find myself reading over and over again. It's a breath of fresh air, I love the subtle rhyme and the beautiful imagery.