Lost love...

by Amreen   Oct 2, 2012


Your love was like
the freshness of a haiku
which perched on the windows of my heart
and delivered letters of affection..

I remember our meetings
symbolising the passion of a love sonnet,
charmed with the tunes of our endless talks
to play our serenade forever...

This bond dwindled Like a reverse etheree
when the syllables of our love
blew over the road of misunderstanding,
scattering our precious moments to perish forever...

Every moment without you is
like a freestyle verse
which lacks the rhyme of life
as you took away the contentment of this journey...

My state without you is like a sad ghazel
which yearns for your care and love,
but you moved on like a song
singing the melodies of our lost love...

[written for a club challenge]

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  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Okay this poem is VERY pretty! :) i love the flow of it all and just the simple fact that it makes me smile at all is a miracle since i don't normally smile when reading poetry about love for some reason or another lol this is a great poem i hope you and i can make a collab one day lol

    Queen Ash

    • 11 years ago

      by Amreen

      Sure Hun.... You could PM me for that whenever you want:)

  • 11 years ago

    by ornella

    Wow this is a good one i liked it a lot

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is an amazing poem! You done a great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    I liked this. It seemed simple to me but had a lot of emotion. Great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This poem is like love at first to me, I just fell inlove with it instantly. Quiet sad to see love that was bound by efforts of committment to start vanishing like a smoke. Hurting and disheartening but one needs to let go when its not worht it.

    When you're not meant to be, you can never be. What will be, will always be; 'Que sera sera'.

    The incorporation of poetry forms gave it an examplary unique structure. Very impressed with that, it gets one loving this gloomy but beautifully written work. Straight from the heart and paints quiet a lucid image.

    Keep up churning such exotic poems. Bon Travail! Blessings.. :) ..

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