Comments : Dreamland

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Strong imagination with great inspiration! I loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by that Dude

    ...wow...

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I loved the opening

    "A tree that sings belong to my heart"

    Such a stunning opening

    The way you decribed this dream land reminded
    Me of a dream you may of had as a little girl
    And maybe you never left even after all these
    Years.

    You always have a place to go
    When you need space
    A really cute poem

    5/5

    Tony :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "Atop purple shaded cotton candy clouds" - what a wonderful line and great use of alliteration here.
    Well done, another really well written piece,
    Ben