This is a really somber poem, full of a long of lingering pain and emotional love.
Heartbreak, it is really beautifully written though.
"My sky still searching you
but you are like a dream flower
It's not real"
^ That stuck out to me a lot, felt it deep within my heart as well as the ending.
Nicely done, keep your head up.
5/5

This is a heartbreaking yet beautiful poem.
Your expression is strong, and I like the 'dream flower' idea you had.

Watch your capitalisation.

I really connect with the line:

'but my unlucky status never left me'

^^ I just love it. Probably for multiple reasons, but I really you have worded it perfectly.

A really great piece, Mohan.
Well done. 5/5

Magnificent lines~

Some nights i struggle without words to say
Darkness became my one-way life
I'm always hearing the sad melodies

nicely penned!

5/5!

Nice one! 5/5 for you!