Comments : Stargasm

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I read this out loud and my tongue died! What a delightful poem... It had tongue twisting stanzas and powerful, random twists and turns.. I love that in a poem and yet it also had a deep message, such as maybe you are struggling with all the chaos in the world and its weighing heavily upon your mind... I also got the feeling of an earth quake brewing.. hence looking down at the road and in stones... mercy! I love poems that take me on a roller coaster ride poetically!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Jordan

      Hey, not trying to plug my own work or anything, but if you like this you should check out my other new-ish poem called "Zero Two Sixty Two Zero."

      It's written in the same style, and based on the same sort of thought processes. I think it's a better piece, though. lol

  • 5 years ago

    by Chelsey

    There is no way for someone to comment on this....lies, there probably is, but there is no way for me to comment on this...omg this was so epic!! Faves <3