I read this out loud and my tongue died! What a delightful poem... It had tongue twisting stanzas and powerful, random twists and turns.. I love that in a poem and yet it also had a deep message, such as maybe you are struggling with all the chaos in the world and its weighing heavily upon your mind... I also got the feeling of an earth quake brewing.. hence looking down at the road and in stones... mercy! I love poems that take me on a roller coaster ride poetically!!