Comments : Cruel mistress

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    Love the turnaround at the end, many many poems try to explain love....a difficult and thought provoking subject. great attempt by the way.

    • 11 years ago

      by tyler

      It helps if theres a back story, well mine is this, im 17 the girl i loved and still love is 17, we planned on getting married but her family forbid her to see me. it put a lot of stress on us both and she ended up breaking it off. Then on top of that she started dating my so called friend, but through everything ive went through i still love her but its just one of those things.

  • 11 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Meaningful, tyler..